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The Sawyer's Daughter's avatar

Wonderful alliteration throughout. That last line ~

Memory is the rain that soothes scorched earth

~ killer!!

Laura Jane Crawford's avatar

Sue Ann, it is such a gift to have you give voice to these poems. Thank you. There are so many lines to highlight here, but one in particular is so precise, so unique, so vivid I keep coming back to it: snails climbing the edge of a whisky barrel. My word. Also, given what we are learning about each other, you will not be surprised to hear that my dad woke me before my alarm, too. And, oh, it would make me so angry then. But I get it now. And now that he's 2000 miles away and battling Parkinson's, I only wish I'd knew enough then to cherish those extra minutes in the morning with him. Thank you for this tribute, this memory, your voice!

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